Student: I think education is more important that future of country.

Correct: I think education is more important that the future of our country.

Student: If people learn well and have knowledge, I think they can revive although they lost country.

Correct: If people have enough knowledge, I think they will survive even though they lost country.

Student: For example; once in early Korea, Japan conquered Korea.

Correct: For example, In historical time, Japan conquered Korea.

Student: They didn't let Koreans use Korean or learn about Korea.

Correct: They didn't let Koreans to use and learn their language.

Student: They oppressed Koreans.

**CORRECT**

Student: But by effort of some people to teach Korean and make newspapers in Korean secretly, so many people didn't lost their self-respect about country.

Correct: But by the effort of some people to teach the language and make newspapers for Koreans secretly, they didn't lost their self-respect for their country.

Student: If they didn't try to educate people, we might not have been able to revival.

Correct: If they didn't try to educate people, we might not have been able to survive.

Today's too short...

REMINDER:

** Please be careful in constructing your sentences. You can omit some information that is not necessary to avoid confusion to the readers.

** Make it as simple but CLEAR.

** Please be mindful in choosing the appropriate WORDS. They might be synonyms but the usage is different.

** Study the usage of ARTICLES, PREPOSITIONS and CONJUNCTIONS.

Hello Min!

Thank you for this point of view. Kindly check them and if you have some questions or clarifications, juts let me know. By the way, I was sad because you were not able to attend the class tonight but I'm sure you have a valid reason for that. I hope that your okay. Please take good care of your health. See you on Thursday! Good night!

Teacher Jane^^