Student: I like soccer verty much.
Correct: I like soccer very much.

Explanation: Please check your spelling
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Student: Becuse I do well.
Correct: Because I can do it well.

Explanation: Please check your spelling and it is better to put "can" to support your verb and we use the pronoun "it" to replace the word soccer.
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Student: And when I shot goal I'm so happy.
Correct: And When I shoot the goal I'm so happy

Explanation: Use the article THE before a specific noun. We use the present tense to describe actions that are factual/true.  
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Student: I'm good soccer player.
Correct: I'm a good soccer player.

Explanation: The indefinite article "a" refers to a particular or certain one of a class or group thing: a man; a chemical; a house.

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Student: I want to play!!!
Correct: CORRECT!
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*************TEACHER'S COMMENT*****************

Hello, Yejun!

Good job for sending your homework fast. Please check your corrections. I'll be seeing you again on Thursday. Keep up the good work. :)

Teacher Claire