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Making the great sentences

작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-11-17

sauna > I went to sauna for bathing with my mom.
vast > I think it is a vast school. It has a large plaground, library and classrooms too!
alps > I thought it was reeally hard to go up the alps.
pope > "The pope museum" was really fantastic.
crystal clear > Han- river was really crystal clear.

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JULIE : I went to sauna for bathing with my mom.
CORRECT : I went to the sauna for bathing with my mom.
EXPLANATION : We add 'the' here because the word sauna here is a noun.

JULIE : I think it is a vast school. It has a large plaground, library and classrooms too!
CORRECT : I think it is a vast school. It has a large playground, library and classrooms too!
EXPLANATION : Be careful with your spelling.

JULIE : I thought it was reeally hard to go up the alps.
CORRECT : I thought it was really hard to go up the Alps.
EXPLANATION : Be careful with your spelling 'really' and Alps is a proper noun that is why it should start with a capital letter.

JULIE : "The pope museum" was really fantastic.
CORRECT : The pope museum was really fantastic.
EXPLANATION : There is no need to use the quotation mark here.

JULIE : Han river was really crystal clear.
CORRECT : Han river is really crystal clear.
EXPLANATION : This sentence is in the present tense because Han river still has crystal clear water.

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Hi Julie! Great job with your sentences. You are really improving with your sentences. I hope you keep it up. I will wait for your next homework again Julie!

~Teacher Louise

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