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Inventor, old fashioned and inventions.

작성자 : cut***   ·   2014-11-14

Inventor Thomas Edison is amiging.
Ther is a town that hoses are made like old fashioned.
One of Edison's inventions is lite boib.

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Su:Inventor Thomas Edison is amiging.
Correct: Inventor Thomas Edison is good at imagining things.

Su:Ther is a town that hoses are made like old fashioned.
Correct: There is a town where you can find old-fashioned things. 
EXPLANATION: Be mindful of the correct spelling of the words.

Su:One of Edison's inventions is lite boib.
Correct: One of Edison's inventions is the light bulb.
EXPLANATION: Be mindful of the correct spelling of the words.

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Hello, Su! Great work! Just be careful of the spelling of the words. I was not able to get your point in your second sentence though, so let's try to discuss that one on Monday. Anyway, thank you for submitting your homework. Have a great weekend, Su! Take care always!^^

-Teacher Isabel

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