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작성자 : CHA***   ·   2014-11-14

1.I if the anmal,want to be an eagle.
Because It's eagle can see th world.
2.I if the anmal,i want to Owls.
Because it's good eyesigth And,Owls look smart.

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Bella: 1.I if the anmal,want to be an eagle.
Because It's eagle can see th world.
Correct: If I would be an animal, I want to be an eagle because I can see the world.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. Don't begin a sentence with 'because'. Conjunction 'because' connects two phrases together. Be mindful with your spelling [ANIMAL] [THE].

Bella: I if the anmal,i want to Owls.
Because it's good eyesigth And,Owls look smart.
Correct: If I would be an animal, I want to be an owl because it has good eyesight and it looks smart.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. Don't begin a sentence with 'because'. Conjunction 'because' connects two phrases together. BE should be added because it would mean to BECOME. Be mindful with your spelling [EYESIGHT] [ANIMAL].

Hello, Bella! Good job for your homework. Thank you for submitting it on time! Happy weekend to you. See you on Monday. Take care always, Bella. ^^


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