Sally: If i love on Jupiter, I want to do everything i can't in earth.
Correct: If I live in Jupiter, I would do everything I can't do in Earth.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. The pronoun 'I' is written in capital letters.

Sally: First, I built my house by my self. and I invite my friends in Jupiter.
Correct: First, I will build my own house and I will invite my friends in Jupiter.
Explanation: Study the tenses of the verb since it's not yet happening that means it's in future tense. Also, don't put period before the conjunction - because it connects two phrases together.

Sally: seconds, I make Jupiter is good to live people. I development science.
Correct: Second, I will make Jupiter as a good planet to live in. I will develop science.
Explanation: Study the tenses of the verb since it's not yet happening that means it's in future tense.

Sally: third, I do exercise i want.
Correct: Third, I will exercise anytime.
Explanation: Start your sentence with a capital letter.

Sally: fourh, I meat my favorite singer.
last, I want to earn the money, then I want to be dutiful my parents.
Correct: Fourth, I will meet my favorite singer.
Lastly, I want to earn money so I can help my parents.
Explanation: Be mindful with spelling [FOURTH] [MEET]. Be appropriate with your words that you're going to use.

Hello, Sally! Good job for your homework! Study the corrections that we have in here! See you on Friday. Thank you! Take care always, Sally! ^^

~ Teacher Belle.