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Title: My favorite chors
Correct: My Favorite Chore

Explanation: You should capitalize the first letter of each word when you write a title and please check your spelling of "Chore".
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Student: My favorite chors is cleaning my room beacuse it's easy.
Correct: My favorite chore is cleaning my room because it's easy.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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Student: And when my room is dirty, I can't do my work
Correct: When my room is dirty, I can't do my work.

Explanation: Don't put the word "and" after a period.
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Student: But I don't like chors
Correct: However, I don't like chores.

Explanation: It is more appropriate to start your sentence with "however" instead of "but".
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Student: just cleanig my room is better.
Correct: Having a clean room is better.

Explanation: It is better to write your sentence this way.

************TEACHER'S COMMENT************

Hello, Yejun! My question is, "What is your LEAST favorite household chore?" but you answered it as " What is you favorite household chore?". Anyway, I'll consider this one. Please be careful of your spelling.

I'll see you again on Thursday! Thank you for passing on time. Good job, Yejun!

- Teacher Claire