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My vending machine
작성자 : khy*** · 2014-11-10
Vending machine's name : Sweet chocalate world
Price of the product : 100
Description : You can make your own chocolate. After you select ingredient
which you want to make, you eat that! That is very fun and tasty.
Price of the product : 100
Description : You can make your own chocolate. After you select ingredient
which you want to make, you eat that! That is very fun and tasty.
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Vending machine's name : Sweet chocalate world
Price of the product : 100
Description : You can make your own chocolate. After you select ingredients needed to make your chocolate, it's fast! That is very fun and tasty.
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