1. Everlanening is exciting.

> Ever land is exciting.

> (Did you mean Ever land?) ~ Please be careful with your spelling.

2. In the evening, I drank a water.

> In the evening, I drank water.  

3. In taikfun, I was speaking English.

> In TalkFun,  I was able to speak in English.

4. My sentence was wrong.

>This sentence is correct.

5. On sunday, I stayed at home.

> or  On Sunday, I stayed home.

6. I feel nervous when I play the violine on the stage.

> I feel nervous when I play the violin on the stage.

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Hello Eric!

    Thank you for doing your homework, it was good. Just be careful with your spelling and study the usage of (Past- present and future tenses of the verb).

 Take care always and keep up the good work! ^_^

~T.Cassie.