JUNE: In Korea for cold, some Koreans put garlic and ginger into water and boil it until water become half and drink it before they go to bed.
In Korea for a stomachache, some Koreans prick with a needle at their thumb to bleed.

CORRECT: This is some of the home remedy in Korea.  For the cold, some Koreans put garlic and ginger into water. They boil it until the water become half and drink it before they go to bed.
For stomachache, some Koreans prick their thumb with a needle to bleed.

EXPLANATION: Consider the use of SENTENCE INTRODUCTION in writing. Please be reminded of the use of proper PUNCTUATIONS. We use PERIOD to end a sentence and COMMA to put pauses on the proper places of the sentence. Be careful also with the proper arrangement of words in order to state a clear meaning of it.

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Hello Jerome!

You don't have much grammar correction in your writing but just be careful when to use proper punctuations.

Thank you for these information. This will be a good help when I need to have a herbal medication.

See you in class,
Teacher Serene ^_^