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essay about my pets
작성자 : woo*** · 2014-11-07
pets are good. People will be happy when they get pets because they have an animal that takes your loves and an animal that listen to you and play with you.
What I want to have for a pet is a puppy.
What I want to have for a pet is a puppy.
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Hello there Woojung,
Thank you for submitting your homework, when it comes to pets i love dogs more than cats too.
Please take note's of my corrections...^_^
Corrections:
pets are good. -Correct
** Your sentence is correct but you need to write the first letter of your sentence capital.
People will be happy when they get pets because they have an animal that takes your loves and an animal that listen to you and play with you.
Correct: People will be happier when they have p