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작성자 : jin***   ·   2014-11-04

Friends remove my sadness.
When I paly with friends, I feel happy.
If we don't have friends, You get bored.
When I play with my friends, it feels like time goes fast.
I can't live without friends.
That's what friens are for!!!

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Friends remove my sadness.
When I paly play with my friends, I feel happy.
If we don't have friends, You you'll get bored.
When I play with my friends, it feels like time goes fast.
I can't live without friends.
That's what friens friends are for!!!


       ============Corrected Sentence/s=================

Linda: When I paly with friends, I feel happy.
Corrected sentence: When I play with my friends, I feel happy.

>>Linda, take note of your spelling, take time to type the words.

Linda: If we don't have friends, You get bored.

Corrected Sentence: If we don't have friends, you'll get bored.

>>You don't need to capitalize the word "you" because it's not the beginning f the sentence it's just the connection of the previous clause you had.

Linda: That's what friens are for!!!
Corrected Sentence: That's what friends are for!!!

>>Again Linda, your spelling.


           ============Comment/s================

Linda, I did not know that you feel sad. If ever you feel sad again, I am always here. OK? Linda, check on your spelling and also you should know when to capitalize the first letter and when not to ok? Take care Linda.

-Teacher Iza

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