Friends remove my sadness.
When I paly play with my friends, I feel happy.
If we don't have friends, You you'll get bored.
When I play with my friends, it feels like time goes fast.
I can't live without friends.
That's what friens friends are for!!!
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Linda: When I paly with friends, I feel happy.
Corrected sentence: When I play with my friends, I feel happy.
>>Linda, take note of your spelling, take time to type the words.
Linda: If we don't have friends, You get bored.
Corrected Sentence: If we don't have friends, you'll get bored.
>>You don't need to capitalize the word "you" because it's not the beginning f the sentence it's just the connection of the previous clause you had.
Linda: That's what friens are for!!!
Corrected Sentence: That's what friends are for!!!
>>Again Linda, your spelling.
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Linda, I did not know that you feel sad. If ever you feel sad again, I am always here. OK? Linda, check on your spelling and also you should know when to capitalize the first letter and when not to ok? Take care Linda.
-Teacher Iza