"What is your favorite childhood toy/game? Why?"
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My favorite chilhood toy is block.
Because I like make a buliding.

My favorite childhood toy is clay
Because I like make a clay art.

My favorite childhood toy is string beads.
Because I like make a necklace.

My favorite childhood game is playing house.
Because long time ago I want be a adult.

My favorite childhood game is playing Nintendo.
Because Nintendo is my first electronic equipment.

My favorite childhood game is Domino.
Because I can focus on Domino.

My favorite childhood game is hide-and-seek.
Because I can play with my friends.

My favorite childhood game is Catch-the-tail.
Because it is very fun.

**********CORRECTION**************

Student: My favorite chilhood toy is block. Because I like make a buliding.
Correct: My favorite childhood toy are blocks  because I like to make a
building.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because". Please always check your spelling, Lina. I replaced "blocks" with "are blocks" because blocks is a set. Lastly, we put "to" before a regular verb.

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Student: My favorite childhood toy is clay. Because I like make a clay art.
Correction: My favorite childhood toy is clay because I like to make a clay art.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because". Also, we put "to" before a regular verb.

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Student: My favorite childhood toy is string beads. Because I like make a
necklace.
Correction: My favorite childhood toy is string beads because I like to make a necklace.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because". Also, we put "to" before a regular verb.

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Student: My favorite childhood game is playing house. Because long time ago I want be a adult.
Correction: My favorite childhood game is playing house because long time
ago I want be an adult.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because". Also, "an" is used when the next word starts with a
vowel (a, e , i, o, u)

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Student: My favorite childhood game is playing Nintendo. Because Nintendo is my first electronic equipment.
Correction: My favorite childhood game is playing Nintendo because Nintendo is my first electronic equipment.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because".

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Student: My favorite childhood game is Domino. Because I can focus on
Domino.
Correction: My favorite childhood game is Domino because I can focus on
Domino.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because".

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Student: My favorite childhood game is hide-and-seek. Because I can play with my friends.
Correction: My favorite childhood game is hide-and-seek because I can play
with my friends.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because".

Student: My favorite childhood game is Catch-the-tail. Because it is very fun.
Correction: My favorite childhood game is Catch-the-tail because it is very fun.

Explanation: No need to put a period before the word "because", never start a sentence with "because".

************TEACHER'S COMMENT*************

Hello, Lina! Good job, because you only have few mistakes. Please review my
corrections. I know that you can do a better job next time.

Your common mistake is starting a sentence with "because", that is grammatically wrong. Never start your sentence with a because.

I'll see you tomorrow, Lina! Keep up the good work! 

- Teacher Claire