Food,Friends,songs,family,and other things make me happpy. also Drawing picture makes me happy. I am happy on weekend.

                         CORRECTED COMPOSITION OF GLORIA

Food, my friends, songs,my family,and other things make me happpy. Also drawing pictures and weekend make me happy.

                                    EXPLANATION

*Always capitalize the first letter of a word in a sentence.

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Hello, Gloria! Thank you so much for sharing the things that make you happy with teacher. See you tomorrow, Gloria! Have a good night!^^

-Teacher Isabel