***************CORRECTION******************

Student: There are Ningan took rest at home.

Correct: There was Ningan who took a rest at home.

>> use "was" because it happened in the past, then put "who" to indicate that Ningan is a person. Lastly, put the article "a" before a noun.

Student: He was to tried, because he saw horror movie yesterday.

Correct:  He was too tired because he saw a horror movie yesterday.


>> to is a preposition, so we use "too" because it is an adjective that is used to express 'more than necessary'

Student: So he took a nap, and he fall asleep.

Correct:  So he took a nap and fell asleep.

>> it should be in past tense

Student: A few hours later, he opened his eyes little bit.

Correct: A few hours later, he opened his eyes a little bit.


>> put the article "a" before an adjective


Student: Then, he saw white thing like a ghost.

Correct:  Then, he saw a white thing like a ghost.


>> put the article "a" before an adjective


Student: And, he couldn't move his body.
Correct: And, he couldn't move his body.

>> no need to put a comma after "and"

Student: unfortunately, he couln't.

Correct: Unfortunately, he couldn't.

>> start your sentence with a capital letter and be careful with your spelling

Student: So he cry out in his sleep.

Correct:  So he cried out in his sleep.

>> use the past tense of the verb

Student: Ningan said "Mother thank you!"

Correct: Ningan said, "Mother, thank you!" 


>> use the proper placement of commas

Student: In fact, the white thing is just a pillow.
Correct: In fact, the white thing is just a pillow.

>> CORRECT!

**********TEACHER'S COMMENT*************

Hello, Lina! You did a good job. I'm happy that you passed your homework. You committed a few mistakes about the usage of the article "a", past tense and place of comma. Your mistakes are not bad, I know that you can improve more as we continue our lesson. :)

Have a great weekend, Lina! I'll see you on Monday.

- Teacher Claire :)