1. I go to bed early at night ex)10:00/11:00
2. I exercise every day for 30 minutes.
3. I eat many kinds of vegetables.
4. I take some medicine like vitamin C , omega three.
5. I always try to smile.

1. I go to bed early at night e.g. 10:00 or 11:00.
2. I exercise every day for 30 minutes.
3. I eat many kinds of vegetables.
4. I take some medicine like vitamin C and  omega three.
5. I always try to smile.

Emily : I go to bed early at night ex)10:00/11:00
Correct : I go to bed early at night e.g. 10:00 or 11:00.
Explanation : When giving examples in a sentence you can use e.g. which means Example Given and don't forget your period. :)

Emily : I take some medicine like vitamin C , omega three.
Correct : I take some medicine like vitamin C and  omega three.
Explanation : In this sentence, there should be not space between the last word and the comma and instead of using a comma you can use 'and' because the next word is the final example that you are giving. 

Hi Emily! Thank you for doing your homework. This made me feel good today. :) I'm happy with your homework because you only had minimal grammar lapses. Keep it up! I like your fifth answer which is "I always try to smile". Yes, I totally agree that this can make a person healthy. Thank you for your homework. I learned something from you. Kudos for this homework!

-Teacher Louise