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on my weekend

작성자 : sti***   ·   2014-10-21

I went to Kyeongju with my family.
I made pizza.
It was really delicious.
I went to Kyeongju world.
I rode a lot of things.
It was great weekends.

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Hello Stina,

           Thank you for answering your homework. Keep it up!

Corrections/ Suggestion:

Stina: I went to Kyeongju with my family.
Correct: Last weekend, My family and I went to Kyeongju.

Stina: I made pizza.
Correct: I made a pizza yesterday.

Stina: It was really delicious.
Correct: The food was really delicious.

Stina:I went to Kyeongju world
.
Stina:I rode a lot of things.
Correct: I tried to ride some adventurous rides.

Stina:It was great weekends
Correct; It was a great weekend.

 

> Good job stina :)  Take care!

- Teacher Keren

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