Hello there Woojung,
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Correction
I think my best trip gave me a big happiness because I was happy while doing trip.
Correct: I think, the best trip I had experienced gave me so much happiness because I enjoy it.
** Be careful in composing your statement.
I think best trip give big happiness to everyone like me.
Correct: I think, a best trip will give so much happiness to everyone just like me.
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I think I have a mind that thinking I want to go again to my best trip because It was so fun, and it gave me a best memories in my best trip.
Correct: I'm thinking of having the same trip again because it was so fun. It's an unforgettable experienced.
**** Use the word "unforgettable" to describe something that is so good, interesting, etc. that you remember it for a long time.
** Be careful in composing your statement.