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작성자 : hyz***   ·   2014-10-20

deck - one of the floors of a ship, bus, or plane

cafeteria - a place where you eat

canteen - a restaurant in an office, factory, or school

frustrated - annoyed because you cannot achieve or do what you want

achieve - to succeed in doing something difficult


This deck is new.
I buy hamburger in cafeteria.
We had lunch in canteen.
He suicide because he was frustrated.
She achieved her goal.

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******************CORRECTION**********************

Lina: This deck is new.
Correct: *no corrections*

>> This one is correct! Good job, Lina.

Lina: I buy hamburger in cafeteria.
Correct: I buy hamburger in the cafeteria.

>> You need to put the article 'the' because the word 'canteen' is a definite noun.

Lina: We had lunch in canteen.
Correct: We had lunch in the canteen.

>> You need to put the article 'the' because the word 'canteen' is a definite noun.

Lina: He suicide because he was frustrated.
Correct: He committed suicide because he was frustrated.

>> You are missing the verb, because when you say 'suicide' only, it's just the act or action killing oneself. When you put the verb 'committed', the action happened.

Lina: She achieved her goal.
Correct: *no corrections*

>> This one is correct! Good job, Lina. 

*****************TEACHER'S COMMENT*****************

Good job, Lina! You only have 3 mistakes. Mostly it's just about the article 'the', next meeting we'll practice the use of the articles (the, a and an). Keep up the good work.

- Teacher Claire :)

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