**************CORRECTION*************

One day, Ningan stayed at home.
When he turned on the television, He heard a terrible noise.
He called to the service center, and asked
"What's the matter with my television?"
Then the staff said "I will go there, Please wait for a while."
After a while, an engineer took a look at the television.
Ningan said, "Please get rid of this noise, I can't stand it."
The engineer said, "It will be okay."
Then Ningan turns on the television again,
however, the noise got worse and worse.
Ningan scold the engineer.
Then the enginneer took a look at the television again.
Fortunately, there is no noise now.
Ningan was happy, because of there are is no noise.

>> Please take note of the tense of your story. The story is told in past tense, so most of your corrections only shows the words that needs to be changed into past tense.

>> The use of different articles such as (the, an, a)

**********TEACHER'S COMMENT***********

Hello Lina, you're very smart! I'm surprised that you can make this kind of story, teacher is very proud of you. Your mistakes are mostly about the tense, you should have used past tense. However, your story and construction is great! Also, keep in mind the usage of different articles, I do believe that you can do it the next time I ask you to create a story. Keep up the good work, Lina! Have a great weekend. :)

- Teacher Claire