Hello Eric!

         For your homework, I asked you to make a composition "Why most of the kids wants to play outside if it is winter?"

      Yes, Eric! This is correct. You are included to the kids. Making snowman and playing snowball together with your friends is fun. Even if it is cold outside it didn't stop you from having fun. Very good, Eric!

      But don't forget to make longer sentences. It is a practice as well to your writing skills.  Also, take time to study again the subject and verb agreement and increase your pleasure in reading  all English references.

 Keep up the good work Eric. See you in the class. ^_^

~T.Cassie