My favorite snack.
I like snacks. However, I like one of them very much. Would you like to guess it? It is made of noodles!!
It is called Busha Busha and it is made of dried noodles. It is delicious when we eat it with soup. I like it much because it is spicy, what I like and not too salty. There is a way to change it into noodle. We have t boil the cracker and put the soup. It won't be much spicy, though. My cousin taught me.
I like to eat it when I go to a field trip or run in a race. It gives me power and energy to win. Most of my classmates like it, too. I think they like Busha Busha with the same reason. However, our teacher said eating too much of crackers is not good to our health. So I am trying not to eat it much. However, I ??'t stop eating it! I think my parents won't give another chance to eat it.

Explanation: Chance means an opportunity to do something. Choice refers to the things or people you can choose from. We use it to mean the thing, situation, or idea that has already been talked about.

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