October16, 2014

Dear -Hyo lee,

What are you doing?
I think you are also studying for midterm test. Am I right?
After the midterm exam, our playing will be exciting.
I love you.?½

Your friend,
Sukyung

Sukyung: Dear -Hyo lee
Correct: Dear -Hyo Lee,
Explanation: We should capitalize the name of particular persons. We should put a comma in our greeting.

Sukyung: I think also syudy subject for midterm
Be right?
Correct: I think you are also studying for midterm test. Am I right? After the midterm test, our playing will be exciting! 
Explanation: Try to widen your vocabulary so you can use the right words for your sentences/ideas.

Sukyung: I love you
Correct: I love you.
Explanation: Don't forget your period. We should end our sentences with a period.

Sukyung:
Youres friend
-Sukyung
Correct:
Your friend,
sukyung  
Explanation: Be careful with your spelling (Your not youres). Put a comma after the closing. Don't use a hypen (-). Just write your name.

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Thank you for doing your homework Sukyung!
-T. Shane