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작성자 : min*** · 2014-10-15
famouse plant is ivy, rose , cherry blossom, cosmos,lily
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Hello, Mina! Thank you for handing in your homework composition. I notice that it is too short. ^^ I hope you try your best to make more sentences. Please study about these corrections...
*********CORRECTED SENTENCE OF MINA PARK*************
The famous plants in Korea are ivy, rose , cherry blossom, cosmos, and lily.
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>> Use the article THE before a specific noun. "Famous plants in Korea" are specific because you specified them one by one.
>> Be careful with the spelling. --> FAMOUS
>> Use the plural form of the noun and verb because you talked about many plants. -->> PLANTS / ARE
>> To lessen the vagueness of your sentence, let's make it more specific by indicating the place where those are famous --> IN KOREA
>> When we are enumerating words, always remember to separate them with commas <,> and put the conjunction AND before the last entry.
>> Don't forget to put a period <.> at the end of your sentence.
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Thank you for sharing me the top 5 most famous plants in Korea, Mina! I will search for all of these later!
~Teacher Ace