I like advertisement for clothes and cosmetics because I would like to buy clothes and make-up. But I will not put on make-up without my parents' consent. Because I think that cosmetics can make your skin worse.
(But I really want to put on make-up.)

Explanation: Make-up isn't a noun, thus we add the verb put on before it to make the sentence correct. If you are talking about both your father and mother, then the word is parents. This is why the correct one is parents' consent. Really is an adverb so we put it before the verb want.

Hi Sally! I'm glad that your writing skills are good, just like your English speaking skills.:) Apply the corrections to your next compositions, as well as when you speak your ideas in the class. Thank you for submitting your homework!:)