Let's be healthy and young!

These days, a lot of people are saying that they want to be beautiful and young. And that is why they are using some products. I want to tell them that it's not the way to stop getting older. I have a more simple and great way. I think you will not believe me. However, I hope that you will know that it is true and it is a fine way.
We have to stand on two feet. We have to stop sitting or lying. We must eat vegetables. They are good for our health. Even tomatoes and strawberries are healthy.
I heard about a girl who live with a mom who really wants to be young. So she used a lot of money to find products. But, thankfully, that girl knew about the tips. She told mom about them and her mom really became a young woman!! But I think it is the best way to just not get to stressed to the youngs.

Julie: These days, a lot of people says they want to be beautiful and young. And that is why there are using some products.  I want to tell them that is not the way to stop being older. I have a more simple and great way. I think you will not believe me. However, I hope that you know that it is true and it is a fine way.
Correct: These days, a lot of people are saying that they want to be beautiful and young. And that is why they are using some products. I want to tell them that it's not the way to stop getting older. I have a more simple and great way. I think you will not believe me. However, I hope that you will know that it is true and it is a fine way.
Explanation: We use these days for temporary situations, hence we should use Present Continuous tense (are saying).

Julie:  We have to stand in two foot. We have to stop sitting or lieing. We must eat vegetables. They are good to our health. Even tomatoes and strawberries help it.
Correct: We have to stand on two feet. We have to stop sitting or lying. We must eat vegetables. They are good for our health. Even tomatoes and strawberries are healthy.
Explanation: We use the preposition on for standing using your feet. Also, when you do not know the spelling of a word, consult your dictionary or google it.

Hello Julie! Great job! Kindly apply the corrections in your next compositions. Thank you for submitting your homework!