- 토크펀 로그인
로그인
회원가입 시 다양한 혜택과 서비스를 이용하실 수 있습니다.
학습방
원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!
영작문첨삭
homework
작성자 : f72*** · 2014-10-12
I was walk in the park.
Well i felled something is run around me!!
Than i in real life two cat.
I'm so surprised.
And i chase away ther two cat
Well i felled something is run around me!!
Than i in real life two cat.
I'm so surprised.
And i chase away ther two cat
답변
William: I was walk in the park.
Correct: I was walking in the park.
Correct: I was walking in the park.
William: Well i felled something is run around me!!
Correct: When I felt something was running around me.
Correct: When I felt something was running around me.
William: Than i in real life two cat.
Correct: Then there were real cats.
Correct: Then there were real cats.
William: I'm so surprised.- Correct!
William: And i chase away ther two cat
Correct: And then I chased away the two cats.
_______________
Hi William,
You did a good again for doing your homework. Study the corrections I'v e made and be careful the next time you will write again. Thank you. See you i our next class. ^*^