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작성자 : f72*** · 2014-10-10
At 1800s Korea thers one countury,
That's name is chsun.
1876s,1882s we make unfairnss sign with Japan and America
And after 1900s the chsun is collapes
This is Koreas 1800s history.
That's name is chsun.
1876s,1882s we make unfairnss sign with Japan and America
And after 1900s the chsun is collapes
This is Koreas 1800s history.
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William: At 1800s Korea thers one countury,
William: That's name is chsun.
William: 1876s,1882s we make unfairnss sign with Japan and America
William:And after 1900s the chsun is collapes
William: This is Koreas 1800s history.
Correct: In 1800s in Korea there's only one country.
William: That's name is chsun.
Correct: That's Chsun.
William: 1876s,1882s we make unfairnss sign with Japan and America
Correct: In 1876 and 1882 we made unfairness sign with Japan and America.
William:And after 1900s the chsun is collapes
Correct: And after 1900s Chsun collapsed.
William: This is Koreas 1800s history.
Correct: This is Korea's 1800s history.
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Hi William,
Wow! You were able to make a paragraph. You've got few corrections. I know the next time you will write you can do it right. Just keep on writing English compositions to practice your writing as well as your grammar. Thank you William. See you in our next class. ^*^