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My favorite pet.

작성자 : cha***   ·   2014-10-09

My favorite pet is dog, cat, wolf, egle, hamster.
Because, my favorite pet is evevry one but represent dog, cat, wolf, egle, hamster. My favorite pet is every one.


-Thank you-

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My favorite pet is dog, cat, wolf, egle,hamster.
Because, my favorite pet is evevy one but represent dog,cat, wolf, egle, hamster. My favorite pet is every one.


-Thankyou-


                                    CORRECTEDCOMPOSITION OF EVAN


My favorite pets aredog, cat, wolf, egle, and hamster.
Ilove all the animals. I consider them as my pets.


-Thankyou-

                                                  EXPLANATIONS

*Avoid redundancy or repetition of words.

* Singular means just one of the person, animal orthing which the noun refers to and you will use "is".Plural means more than one and you will use "are".


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Hi, Evan! Thank you for submitting your homework.Kindly study the corrections. See you tomorrow!^^


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