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How cellphones changed our way of communication

작성자 : nim***   ·   2014-10-08

We can connect someone who we want to talk anytime and any place. In some case we can talk facing each other. We can also semd a text massage including pictures.

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We can connect someone who we want to talk anytime and any place. In some case we can talk facing each other. We can also semd a text massage including pictures.

*******Correction for Jerome's homework*********
1.
Jerome: connect someone 
correct: connect to someone

Explanation:
Use "TO" to indicate the place, person, or thing that someone or something moves toward, or the direction of something.

2.
Jerome: and any place
correct: and on any place

Explanation:
ON is used to indicate location at or along. It is advisable to learn the uses of preposition to improve your writing and sentence construction skills.

3.
Jerome: In some case we can talk facing each other.
correct: In some cases we can talk while seeing each other on the cellphone.

Explanation:
Let us use WHILE in your sentence and add a dependent clause to complete the thought of your statement.

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Hello Jerome!

I actually agree with your opinion. Cellphones has changed a lot when it comes to our way of communication. It is more convenient than before.

Please take note of some of your corrections in your sentences to improve your writing skills more.

Have a good night and see you in class!

Always,
Teacher Serene ^_^

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