William: HI this is the test of maze.

Correct: Hi this is the maze test.

William: Do you want be a rich?

Correct: Do you want to be rich?

Explanation: Article 'a' isunnecessary.

William: den you have to come throughthe maze for good things

you have to follow rules

Correct: Then you have to come throughthe maze for good things and you have to follow the rules.

Explanation: And is a coordinatingconjunction. It is used to join two or more clauses of equalimportance or rank. The clauses joined by and express relationshipssuch as time, cause and effect, contrast and condition.

William: 1. don't go up the maze

CORRECT!

William: 2. don't break eannything

Correct: 2. don't break anything

Explanation: Be careful of yourspelling

William: thank you

Correct: Thank you.

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Hi William,

                I'm glad that you were able to do and submit your homework again. Make sure to study the corrections and explanations I've given and apply it the next time you will write a composition again See you later! ^*^