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작성자 : had***   ·   2014-10-07

Because we can play the beach bolley ball, we can get suntan, we can go surfing sail the boat and we can swim.

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           Because we can play the beach bolley ball, we can get suntan, we can go surfing sail the boat and we can swim.

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   Hi Eric!

           Your homework was "Why most people love going to the beach?" Here are your corrections.

     Let's us make your sentence clear in order for the readers to understand it.       

       *People love going to the beach because they enjoy playing beach volley ball, some will stay under the sun to have a tan skin. Also, others love surfing, sailing and most especially swimming.


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   ~Eric, be careful with your spelling and use dictionary as your guide when you are unsure of the words that you will use.

  ~ Practice as well reading orally to enhance your pronunciation and practice writing English words so you won't misspell it.


   Thank you for your being active in the class and I enjoy teaching you. Keep it up Eric. See you in the class! ^_^


T.Cassie

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