Because we can play the beach bolley ball, we can get suntan, we can go surfing sail the boat and we can swim.
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Hi Eric!
Your homework was "Why most people love going to the beach?" Here are your corrections.
Let's us make your sentence clear in order for the readers to understand it.
*People love going to the beach because they enjoy playing beach volley ball, some will stay under the sun to have a tan skin. Also, others love surfing, sailing and most especially swimming.
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~Eric, be careful with your spelling and use dictionary as your guide when you are unsure of the words that you will use.
~ Practice as well reading orally to enhance your pronunciation and practice writing English words so you won't misspell it.
Thank you for your being active in the class and I enjoy teaching you. Keep it up Eric. See you in the class! ^_^
T.Cassie