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Asian Games

작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-10-02

CULTURES
Our country usually have their own cultures. They tries to make it known to other countries. And that is why we are having the Asian game. There are 45 countries competing. We go to the country where it is holding and this year, it was held in Korea, Incheon. And a lot of people from a lot of country came to Incheon. That is very great thing because it means that they are visiting Korea and Korea will be famous. That includes other countries. When it is hold at China, China will be famouse that time. Like that if we have Asian games, we can show our cultures to other countries people. Also we can learn it from them. Some will think that games is just games, But I don’t think so. It is a way to show and teach our cultures and learn other’s. So I think Asian Games are Holding in good reason.
I hope there are a lot of people liking th Asian Games. I think they will when they read this. And they will also know that they can do something nice to our country to watch the Asian games.

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Countries have their own culture. They try to make it known to other countries. And that is why we are having the Asian game. There are 45 countries competing. We go to the country where it is taking place and this year, it is being held in Incheon, Korea. And a lot of people from different country came to Incheon. That is a great thing because it means that they are visiting Korea and Korea will be famous. When it was held in China, China was famous that time. When we have Asian games, we can show our cultures to other countries. Also, we can learn it from them. Some will think that games are just games, But I don't think so. It is a way to show and teach our cultures and learn others. So I think there is Asian Games for a good reason.
I hope that there will be a lot of people who like the Asian Games. I think they will when they read this. And they will also know that they can do something nice to our country by watching the Asian games.

Hello Julie! When you use hope, the sentence must be in future tense. Study how the your sentences are corrected. You just have to expand your knowledge about word usage for you to choose the appropriate word in your sentence.

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