DENIS WORK:

Where is the date?

Dear Joanna.

    How are you? Me I'm feeling great. I'm having a fun with my family. It's a sunny in Seoul today. At school I'm having a great time. When I have free time I usually played baseball.
    How about you? What do you usually do in tour free time? I'll see you next class. Good Bye.

Sincerely yours,
Denis

CORRECTION:

October 1, 2014

Dear Joanna,

    How are you? Me, I'm feeling great. I'm having fun with my family. It's sunny in Seoul today. At school, I always had a great time. Whenever I have free time I usually play baseball.
    How about you? What do you usually do in your free time? I'll see you next class. Good Bye.

Sincerely yours,
Denis


EXPLANATION:

1. Don't forget the heading part of the date of you letter. It's very important.

2. Don't forget to observe proper indention of your paragraphs.
3. Please be careful with your spellings. Example: tour - your
4. Always observe proper tenses of your verb. Example : played - play (present tense)
5. Please observe proper punctuation mark. Specifically your comma.

COMMENT:
October 2, 2014


Dear Denis,

    Hi ! I'm happy that you were able to send me your homework. I'm glad that you almost got a perfect friendly letter. Thank you for sending me your homework and I hope to see more developments from you. Good night and see you tomorrow.

Sincerely yours,
Teacher Joanna ^_^