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작성자 : rar***   ·   2014-10-02

Speaking English is important to get a good job.
In my case, I want to speak English well.
So, i want to travel to English-Speakig countries.
Anyway, I enjoy studying English

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Rara: So, i want to travel to English-Speakig countries.
Correct: And, I want to travel in an English speaking countries.
Explanation: You can use the conjunction 'AND' since it's an additional details for your composition - it's used to connect grammatically coordinate words, phrases, or clauses. Also, check the spelling of [SPEAKING] and the pronoun 'I' if we're going to used it, it should be capitalized.

Rara: Anyway, I enjoy studying English
Correct: Anyway, I enjoy studying English.
Explanation: Please be observant with the use of punctuation marks like PERIOD [.].


Hello Rara! You did a good job everyday. I know that you can do more. Just try to express yourself no need for you to be shy. Go Rara! Keep going!

Love,
Teacher Belle.

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