ANDREW'S HOMEWORK:

1. My favorite holiday is children (period)

2. I like celebrate to me (period)

3. Yesterday i get together at my friend house (period)

4. Have fun!~~~~~~~~~


CORRECTION:

1. My favorite holiday is Children's Day.

2. I like to celebrate with my friends.

3. Yesterday, I get together with my friends at one of our friend's house

4. Have fun!

EXPLANATION:

1. Capitalize the name of an event especially holiday. Always capitalize the pronoun "I."

    Example: Children's Day
                  Labor Day

2.  Try to learn how to use prepositions to make your sentences much clearer such as; to , with, for etc.

3.  Don't forget your proper punctuation marks.

Comment:

Hi Andrew!
Thank you for sending me your homework. I'm happy to read and check your sentences. They're good yet you still need to make them clearer and more complete. Anyways, we will talk about this things that you need to improve on next meeting. See you and good night!
-Teacher Joanna ^_^