On Friday, I will go to KFC with my sister, my mother, my father and I.
The food is very yummy!

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1.
Anna: i will fridey i go to the K F C with my sister mother father me
Correct: On Friday, I will go to KFC with my sister, my mother, my father and I.
Explanation:
*Use on before the name of the day.
*Use will to show that the action will happen in the future.
*Take note of the pronouns used in your sentence such as my and I.

2.
Anna: very yummy!!
Correct: The food is very yummy!
Explanation:
*Put a subject in your sentence. The subject is the one being  talked about in a sentence.

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