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MY FAVORITE COLOR AND WHY? (Bella)

작성자 : CHA***   ·   2014-09-30

I like the color green.
beacause,I like the woods.

I like the color yellow.
beacause,yellow is a warm feeling good.

I like the color bule.
beacause,the bule is a cool feeling.

I like the color pink.
beacause,pink is a pretty color.

Bella^=^~~

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Bella: I like the color green.
beacause,I like the woods.
Correct: I like green, because I like nature.
Explanation: No need for you to put the word color since it's already understood that Green is part of different colors. Also, please check the spelling of [BECAUSE]. And there are some words which is associated with the other word but then it's not appropriate with the sentence.

Bella: I like the color yellow.
beacause,yellow is a warm feeling good.
I like the color bule.
beacause,the bule is a cool feeling
Correct: I like yellow, because it connotes warm feeling which is good.
I like blue, because it connotes a cool feeling.
Explanation: The same with the first sentence - No need for you to put the word color since it's already understood that Yellow and Blue are already connected with different colors. Also, please check the spelling of [BECAUSE] and [BLUE]. You can use the word [CONNOTE] since your pertaining about something.

Bella: I like the color pink.
beacause,pink is a pretty color.
Correct: I like pink, because it's pretty.
Explanation: The same with the first and second sentence - No need for you to put the word color since it's already understood that Pink is already connected with different colors. Also, please check the spelling of [BECAUSE]. And, no need for you to repeat the color in your sentence because it's redundancy - it's understandable that you're pertaning with colors.

Hello Bella! You did a good job for your homework. Actually, you're doing good every class. Just stay focus and attentive. I know that you'll be better! Go Bella!

Love,
Teacher Belle.

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