I was very busy last weekend. On saturday, I went to children's park for volunteer work. lt's public campaign for children.That's the why that my dream is want to be a doctor. Someday,my dream's come ture.It's good experience to me.
On sunday, l participate in the writing contest about environment. The contest was held in citizen park. The subject of the contest is about the citizen park.
I am always interested in environment.
last week,so I was very hard but happy.

                              CORRECTED COMPOSITION OF JINI

I was very busy last weekend. On Saturday, I went to the children's park for volunteer work. lt's public campaign for children.That's the reason why my dream is  to be a doctor. Someday,my dream will do come true.It was a good experience for me.
On Sunday, l participated in the writing contest about environment. The contest was held at the citizen park. The subject of the contest was about the citizen park itself. I am always interested in environment.
Last week was very hard but I was happy.

                                       EXPLANATIONS

*The definite article "the" is used especially before a noun or nouns like people or things.
*The pronoun "itself" is used to emphasize a particular thing or animal mentioned.
* Always capitalize the first letter of  your sentence.
*If you started your paragraph in PAST TENSE, then you must be consistend until the end of it.

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Hello, Jini! Thank you for submitting your homework. Kindly observe and study the corrections. You did a great job! It was nice meeting you tonight. See you again on Thursday.

-Teacher Isabel