Cell phones
"Everyone, listen. tomorrow we will have some tests. so make sure that you are well-studied." Mrs. Red said.
"Again a test." "Here and there are tests." "If am not having good scores I won't have presents this year."
However, Sarah looked happy. She said that she had studied a lot. She phoned her mom. Her cell phone looked expensive. Natalie was jealous at her.
At home, she said that her phone is so small. "Mom, I want a new brand cell phone. Sarah has it!"
But her mom said, "Cell phones are not important. Sarah's parents are rich so she can get it. But you can't!"
The next day, Sarah was looking fun talking about her new cell phone.
"I bought something really nice." "See?" Natalie was amazed. At the class time, she took a test. While she was on her 8th problem, a phone rang. Sarah was looking sorry. Then, she took her phone and turned it off.
'Having cell phones are not too good.' Natalie thought.

Julie: "If am not having good scores I wont have presents this year."
Correct:  "If am not having good scores I won't have presents this year."
Explanation: Be mindful of an apostrophe. It makes a word into its simple form. It can make your sentence vague when you don't put an apostrophe to a word.

Julie: "Mom, I want new brand cell phone. Sarah has it!"
Correct:  "Mom, I want a new brand cell phone. Sarah has it!"
Explanation: A is used before a noun to mean one thing or person.

Julie: Sarah's parents would be rich so she can get it. But you can't!"
Correct: Sarah's parents are rich so she can get it. But you can't!"
Explanation: It's true that Sarah's parents are rich, so use the present tense.

Julie: Sarah was looking sorry. Then, she took her phone and make it off.
Correct: Sarah was looking sorry. Then, she took her phone and turned it off.
Explanation: Choose the right word when saying a certain situation.

Hello, Julie! Great work! You commit less mistakes now in your composition. Keep it up!:) Thank you for submitting your homework.