1.My first hobby is draw a picture.becuase,I like drawing.So,drawing a picture is my hobby. (My first hobby is drawing a picture. I like drawing. So drawing a picture is my hobby.)

2.My second hobby is play a piano.because,I like play a piano.So,play a piano is my hobby. (My second hobby is playing the piano. I like playing the piano. So playing the piano is my hobby.)

3.My last hobby is ride a bike.because,My favorite exercise is ride a bike.So,ride a bike is my hobby. (My last hobby is riding a bike. My favorite exercise is riding a bike. So riding a bike is my hobby.)

*Observe the proper use of verb tenses: past, present, and future tenses.

*Be aware of the right punctuations; eg: period(.); comma(,); exclamation(!); question mark(?).

*Avoid redundancy.

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Hi Erin,

                           Thank you for doing and submitting your homework. I'm glad that you were able to share your hobbies. You really have good hobbies. Keep doing it. Just take a look at the corrections I've made. Please observe that the next time you will write a composition again. Thank you. See you tomorrow Erin. Goodnight!^*^