Fall!
I like fall. It is not humid. It is not hot. I like to see the leaves fall down like a fairy. I like to see the brown trees dancing like a star. The wind blows and I like it very much.
Waking up happily, Sue went down to the dining room. Her mother's egg sandwich was smelled around the house. Today was the day of field trip. Sue liked it because there, her secret friend Fall was waiting. The bus was very cool. That was what her friend Fall gave to her. When they arrived at the park, she sat down on the leaves with her friends. That was what fall gave. Sue was thankful to fall. There are reasons. She was thankful because it gave the food they need, the wind they need, the trip they need, and the happy things they need.
It is true. It is a real story. If we don't have Fall, we cannot eat, and play with leaves. Even though there are bugs, we have to love the fall season.
We have to be greatful that there are friends like Fall too!!
The nicest season friend is Fall! ( I wonder... How about you?)

Julie: I like fall. It is not humid. It is not hot. I like to see the lives fall down like a fairy. I like the see the brown trees dancing like a star. The wind blows and I like it very much. Here, I am going to say someone like me. Who likes fall!
Correct: I like fall. It is not humid. It is not hot. I like to see the leaves fall down like a fairy. I like to see the brown trees dancing like a star. The wind blows and I like it very much.
Explanation: Be careful of the word spelling. You cannot convey your message clearly if your words are misspelled.

Julie: Waking up happily, Sue went down to the diner room. Her mother's egg sandwich was smelling. Today was the day of field trip. Sue liked it because there, her secret friend fall was waiting. The bus was very cool. That was what her friend fall had given. When they landed at the park, She sat down at the leaves with her friends. That was what fall gave. Sue thanked to fall. There are reasons. She thanked it because it gave the food they need, the wind they need, the trip they need, and the happy things they need.
Correct: Waking up happily, Sue went down to the dining room. Her mother's egg sandwich was smelled around the house. Today was the day of field trip. Sue liked it because there, her secret friend Fall was waiting. The bus was very cool. That was what her friend Fall gave to her. When they arrived at the park, she sat down on the leaves with her friends. That was what fall gave. Sue was thankful to fall. There are reasons. She was thankful because it gave the food they need, the wind they need, the trip they need, and the happy things they need.
Explanation: Seasons such as Fall, the first letter should be capitalized. If you use the verb form thank then it should be followed by to. For example, Sue thanked Fall.

Julie: It is true. It is a right story. If we didn't had fall, we could not eat, and play with leaves. Even though there are bugs, we have to love the fall season. We have to be greatfull that there are friends like falls to!!
The nicest season friend is fall! ( I think. How about you?)
Correct: It is true. It is a real story. If we don't have Fall, we cannot eat, and play with leaves. Even though there are bugs, we have to love the fall season. We have to be greatful that there are friends like Fall too!!
The nicest season friend is Fall! ( I wonder... How about you?)
Explanation: If you are not sure of the word that you're going to use in your sentence, consult a dictionary. You should use appropriate words to convey your statements clearly and understandable.

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