Hello, Lena! Wow, it was so fast! Thank you for doing your homework right away. Please study about these corrections...

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For breakfast, I like to eat cereals. I like rice and galbi for lunch.
And for dinner,I like to eat rice, kimchi, and laver!!!

< To Teacher Ace >
Thank You!!

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Wow, Lena. I did not correct any of your grammar because all are correct. I just made some technical corrections...

LENA: For breakfast,I like to eat cereals.
CORRECT: For breakfast, I like to eat cereals.

>> Put a space after a comma. <,>
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LENA: And for dinner,I like to eat rice,Kimchi,and laver!!!
CORRECT: And for dinner,I like to eat rice, kimchi, and laver!!!

>> There's no need to capitalize the food kimchi because it is not a brand name.

>> Again, don't forget to put a space after a comma <,>
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LENA: < To Teacher Ace > Thank You!!

>> To Lena: "You're welcome!"

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Thank you for sharing me your favorite food! I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much that you are able to submit a homework composition for the first time! I hope that this is the start of religious homework compositions!

I love you, Lena!

~Teacher Ace