Ashley homework:

1.Everything looks so beautiful when the snow blows white on the world
2.We can eat many food in the harvest season
3.It must be burning cause i see you sweating in this weather
4.We would like to go to the sea in a hot day
5.Do you want to build a snow man with the snow white on the ground

Ashley: Everything looks so beautiful when the snow blows white on the world
Correct: Everything looks so beautiful when the snow blows white in the world
Explanation: You will use the preposition in to indicate a place while the preposition on is for on a surface of something (e.g on a mountain, on my fott, on the floor)

Ashley: It must be burning cause i see you sweating in this weather
Correct: It must be burning because i see you sweating in this weather
Explanation: cause is just th short term for because.

Comment:
Hi Ashley! I was very happy to see your homework today. You did a good job in here. I'm proud of you because you just had minor grammar lapses in here. It seems that you are not really forgetting what I always tell you in our class. Keep up the good work, Ashley. I''ll see you, later! Bye!
Lots of love,
Teacher Dianne^.^