Leem's homework:
I watched tv and take some rest.

-My favorite movie is How to Train Your dragon.
And the best scene is the boy fly with his partner dragon.
The boy lost his leg and the dragon lost his tail, but they make a beautiful teamwork so they can fly well.
The dragon couln't fly alone at first, but he finally learn how to fly with out its tail.
And the dragon is so cute, so I love this movie.

1.
Leem: I watched tv and take some rest.
Correct: I watched tv and took some rest.
Explanation: If something happened in the past, you should use past tense of the verb.

2.
Leem: And the best scene is the boy fly his partner dragon.
Correct: The best scene is when the boy flew with his partner.
Explanation: Never start your sentence with the word 'And'. Also, remember, if you are going to tell a story, verbs shuld be in the past tense.

3.
Leem: The boy lost his leg and the dragon lost his tail, but they make a beautiful teamwork so they can fly well.
Correct: Even though, the boy lost his leg and the dragon lost his tail, they still made it. They had  a good teamwork and flew well.
Explanation: Refer to second explanation. Also, use the word even though because it means 'despite the fact that..' In your sentence, the two cahracters had a difficulty but they were still succesful despite the fact that they lost one part of their bodies.

4.
Leem: The dragon couln't fly alone at first, but he finally learn to fly with out its tail.
Correct: The dragon couldn't fly alone at first, but in the last part of the movie, he learned how to fly without its tail. / The dragon couldn't fly at first, but he finally learned how to fly without its tail as shown in the last part of the movie.
Explanation: Again, use past tense of the verb if something happened/ finished.

Comment:
Hi Leem! Thank you for sending me this homework. I'm really having fun talking to you in our class. I hope to hear more stories from you, Leem. See you tomorrow. By the way, you did a great job with this composition. Just don't forget my explanation and take note of my corrections. Thank you, Leem. See you tomorrow! :)))
Lots of love,
Teacher Dianne ^.^