The space life
"If I Live in space, I would............." That is what today people say.
But have you imagined the world that have real space life??
The world that has people saying "If I live in Earth, I would.............." ?
That would be strange. It is hard to imagine life like that. The aliens will be your friends when you go to school. You will fly when you go to school. When you sleep, your bags fly because of the gravity.
Shon was waiting her turn to say. After her best alien friend, Sueble's report, she stood up and said, "I want to live in Earth, because there will be gravity and air!!"
Everyone clapped. The teacher said that her report was great. She said that the report for tomorrow was a life at Earth.
The next day, everyone brought their reports. They were looking at other people's pictures.
"How can people walk??" "How can people live without the airsuit??" "Why would people sleep without the rope?" Why isn't it dark outside the window??"
Look, there are a lot of differences between space and Earth lives.

Julie: But have you imagined the world that have real space life??
The world that have people saying "If I lived in Earth, I would.............." ?
That would be strange. It is hard to imagine life like that. The aliens will be friends with you when you go to school, You will fly to go to school. When you sleep, Your bags fly because of the gravity.
Correct But have you imagined the world that have real space life??
The world that has people saying "If I lived in Earth, I would.............." ?
That would be strange. It is hard to imagine life like that. The aliens will be your friends when you go to school. You will fly when you go to school. When you sleep, your bags fly because of the gravity.
Explanation: Be mindful of Subject-Verb Agreement. Study how the sentences are formed.

Hello Julie! Great work! You commit less grammar mistakes now and you apply what you learn from your homework corrections. Keep it up!:)