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crowded - I don't want to go to the festival because it is too crowded. / I don't like going to festivals because they are too crowded.

frank - To be frank with you, I forgot the appointment.

drown - A little girl was drowning, but a man saved her life. / A little girl was drowning, but a man went to save her life.

expired - You can't join the program because it was expired finished yesterday.

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LEEM: I don'tlike to go to the festival because there is too crowded.
CORRECT: I don't want to go to the festival because it is too crowded. / I don't like going to festivals because they are too crowded. / I don't like going to the festival because it is too crowded.

>> Study about the difference between WANT and LIKE. WANT is used when you desire something later or in the future. It can be you desire to own something or you desire to do something. Meanwhile, LIKE is used when you desire something for many times. You always feel it.

>> When we want to use the preposition LIKE, follow it with a GERUND. A gerund is a word that ends in -ing that is made from a verb but used as a noun.

Examples of gerund: going, playing, cooking, studying, etc.

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LEEM: To be frank with you, I forgot the appiontment.
CORRECT: To be frank with you, I forgot the appointment.

>> Be careful with the spelling. -->> APPOINTMENT
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LEEM: A little girl was drowning, but a man save her life.
CORRECT: A little girl was drowning, but a man saved her life. / A little girl was drowning, but a man went to save her life.

>> Since you indicated that the scene is in the past tense as manifested by the verb WAS, let's transform the verb SAVE to its past tense, too. -->> SAVED or WENT TO SAVE
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LEEM: You can't join the programe because it was expired yesterday.
CORRECT: You can't join the program because it was expired finished yesterday.

>> Oh, please be reminded of the appropriate usage of the word EXPIRED. It means something that comes to an end or stops being in use. Like in literal meaning, something died. For example, the effectiveness of a medicine, the contract at work, or the legality of a license. But, not the program. Programs finish, not expire.

>> Be careful with the spelling. -->> PROGRAM

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Good job, Leem! Please study about these corrections so that you will not commit the same mistakes. Thank you for handing in your homework on time. Keep up the good work!