Hi I'm Miki.

My job is illustrator. (My job is an illustrator.) *Use the indefinite article 'an' before a noun that begins with a vowel sound.

But my career is bad because My parents said "Your hope is not possible." (But my career isn't good because my parents said "Your hope is impossible.) *Be careful when it comes to capitalization, it should not be capitalized if the word is in the middle of a sentence unless its a name, place or a title.)

But,I didn't give up, I chased and entertain to my parents. (But I didn't give up. I chased my parents and entertained them.) *Be mindful of the proper verb, adjective or noun that you will use to describe things or situations so that people will understand what you mean. And try to observe the use of verb tenses, past; present; future.

So, now I happy because, my artworks are published to the world. (So, now I'm happy because my artworks were published all over the world.)  *Being able to find the right subject and verb will help you correct errors of subject-verb agreement. The basic rule is that a singular subject takes a singular verb, whereas a plural subject takes a plural verb.

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Hi William,

                           You did a good job again William. Thank you for submitting your homework on time. Try to study the corrections and explanations I've made. Apply it the next time you will write a composition. Just continue writing. It would you improve your writing and grammar skills. Thank you William. Have a goodnight. See you again tomorrow! ^*^