Kwon's Homework

- set one's sights on something
I set my sights on finishing my paper until this month

- yaer in year out
Year in year out for more than 2years He has been writing his doctoral paper

- make an attempt
I made attempt to finish my paper by last month, but my adbisor didn't accept it

- force someone back
He tried to participate in this Asiangame, but his bad health forced him back.

- come up
you need to go back home before sun comes up

- make history
If he can participate in this Asiangame, he would make history.

CORRECTION:
- set one's sights on something
I set my sight on finishing my paper by this month.

- year in year out
Year in year out for more than two years he has been writing his doctoral paper.

- make an attempt
I made an attempt to finish my paper by August but, my adviser didn't accept it.

- force someone back
He tried participating in Asian game but, his bad health forced him back.

- come up
You need to go back home before the sun comes up.

- make history
If he can participate in this Asian game, he would probably make history.

EXPLANATION:

1. Don't forget about your proper punctuation mark in every ending of your sentences. You need to put period every time you will close a sentence.

2. Please spell out the numbers from one to ten in your compositions bu If it's 20 and up you could just use the numerical symbols for that number.

3.Please be careful on some of your spellings;

   -participating

   -adviser

   -Asian games

COMMENT:

Hi Sir Kwon! Thank you for sending me your homework. I am really happy to check your homework and found out that you only have minor grammar lapses. I compliment your effort and hard work in our class because you are not only a student but also a husband to your wife. I want to congratulate you for managing everything perfectly. Well, I'm looking forward to our class together.

-Teacher Joanna