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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2014-09-15

Attackers have to be under observation in school and they must apologize to their vitims and vitims' parents. If attackers are being taken pretty serious, they have to get more strict penalties.

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           Attackers have to be under observation in school and they must apologize to their vitims and vitims' parents. If attackers are being taken pretty serious, they have to get more strict penalties.


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      Hello Linda! Thank you so much for doing your homework  and  for being a very participative student in the class. You always show great interest towards learning and you are very zealous to improve your English skills. In addition,  I commend you for giving a positive response in our topics and you are always fair when it comes to giving out opinions.

        For your homework, I asked your opinion about, What should be the penalty for those attackers.  Here's my corrections:

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 *Attackers have to undergo observation in the school and they must apologize to their victims and the victims parents. If attackers are being taken pretty seriously, they have to get stricter in giving penalties.           


      Thank you, Linda! Hope to see you again.


~T. Cassie ^_^

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